Tuesday, November 2, 2010

SMILE

You never heard me bawl.

When you stabbed my heart and snatched my soul.

I thought you will keep it…

But you let it fall on the floor.


I picked up my fragmented heart,

And tried to fix its broken parts.

I started to bathe with tears,

When I saw you smashing it with your heels.


I screamed and shouted,

For you to stop it.

I wanted to kill you,

But I just can’t do it.


Step by step, you walked towards me

And little by little I felt excited.

Suddenly, you flashed your smile,

And a sacrificial victim is once again alive.

6 comments:

  1. When you stubbed my heart and snatched my soul
    -what the hell is STUBBED?! XD haha di ba STABBED? Stubbed? Meaning ginawang tickets? XD

    When I saw you smashing it with your hills.
    -HILLS? Oke to a, ginamit yung bundok pangwasak ng puso! XD ahaha

    I wanted to kill you,
    But I just can’t do it.
    -kay JR ba to? XD

    bitter nanaman *barf* XD

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  3. I left something para may maokray ka. >:)

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  4. Faye, so harsh!

    Maki, i don't care much about the errors in this post. I like the thought of a smile could bring back a battered heart. :)
    Good job! :D

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  5. @maki sarreh joke lang. natuwa lang talaga ako sa post mo, mas nagustuhan ko ito dahil sa errors, in fairness, maganda nga *barf* XD

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  6. HAHA! binawi ni Faye! amp. =))
    Maki, lakas ng tama mo sa girlaloo na yan ah! =))
    sino kaya? >:)

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